The protagonist of the story, Amina is quite intriguing. I find her character was well developed but the story wasn't. The story just seemed to fall flat and become boring after a few paragraphs. Amina's narrative is a little confusing and takes some time getting used to. The narrative seems shift all over the place that I have to go back and re-read what was written. The pacing of the story was quite slow, I found it hard to keep track and found it hard to keep my interest in reading the story.

I would have liked to know more about the character, George. The story doesn't tell us much about him at all. In this story, I felt there was a lot of things that were touched on, but there was no further mentioning of it, which made for me, felt like there were holes in the story.

To me it, the story wasn't a satisfying to read.